two lines

for a contest.

I held my wrist out before me, feeling alive as it warmed.

I loved it when he held me there.

Reviews

[Rana]

I perceived these to be amazing words depicting the appreciation and love of a child for his father who guides the child. There is proper placement of climax.

And

Congratulations on winning the contest. Keep writing, you've got what it takes to make a good writer.