love-2

i can love
i can do everything for love
what i can do for love
you can not believe

you can not believe
or you can not receive my love
i can love
but you are not appropriate for my love
you are not credible or reliable for my love

just see
when i touch the dew of the leaves
dews are fall down
or when i touch the touch me not plant
you are shy

i am afraid of your shyness
i am afraid of your fall down

so now i know i can love you
but you are not eligible for love me

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

thnx

;-) Just wanted to beat you to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is hard. It seem we love what we can't have. I like the desire and the description in the poem. Love is luck and timing. Need to find the person you desire on the same path and with the same desire. Hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem,.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

This is very good, very lyrical, and I bet it reads very well in your native language too.
A poem with a lot of quality.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a whole lot of frustration in this kind of love. Complicated from the get go. Nicely pen'd.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Desirable yet out of reach. That hurts so let's make up an excuse why it wasn't really desirable after all.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Inda]

Ah, forbidden love; hurts.
Good job here!

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A spiritual feel to this piece that has a mix of emotions from sad to enlightenment.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx