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End Days - Ch # 05 "Exodus (Rated TEEN version)"

End Days - Ch # 05 "Exodus (Rated TEEN version)"

A Chapter by dw817
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Lorraine continued, "I want to taste you, David. And you yourself WANT to be tasted. Do not deny yourself this pleasure !" She then rolled her tongue across her perfect white teeth.

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  End Days - Ch # 05  

 


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END DAYS

© July 2013 Written by David Wicker
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CHAPTER 5 - EXODUS (rated
TEEN - certain elements have been removed and rewritten)

The mist had now lifted from my unseen other friend and I could see now that she was a girl, about my age, and looked to be a combination of Pakistan and Oriental combined. Really rather pretty at that.


And apparently she, too, was undergoing these 'pains' as I was, for her prettiness was clouded by earlier crying and she, too, was holding a small crystalline bowl in her hand.


Having had enough torments for one day I set my own bowl down on the ground. Suddenly it changed shape into that of a crystal. Much longer at the top than the sides so it was like a double-edged knife with no handle to it. I felt it important to keep so I hurriedly placed it in my pocket.


Then I heard someone else speaking. It wasn't a different Being, no, it was the girl across the way, but it was not amplified. And I didn't understand her language so I just raised up one of my hands in friendly gesture. She looked at me for a moment finally becoming silent and finally mirrored my hand actions.


We were interrupted by the peaceable silence when Being spoke - as if reading my thoughts, "How indeed. How indeed has my tapestry gone so wrong ? Perhaps you can find the answer for me - David."


And when the Being spoke my name, it was thrilling. As if a Father might call his own beloved child. And I knew, no matter how old or how wise I became, that I would always ALWAYS be a child to Him. I paused in my thoughts.


Mankind may indeed reach the farthest stars as I had hoped, but - and I felt tears moisten my eyes again, it wouldn't be in my lifetime. It wouldn't be - now. For now is - and I thought about it - if only for an instant - man seemed to have gotten no further than plundering our great Sapphire Earth for it's resources, for man's greatest comforts and pleasures and naught much more than that.


I felt - despicable. Dirty. Terrible - that I could call myself a descendant of man. And perhaps I would be punished for this. For suddenly I couldn't breathe ! My own breath was trapped within my chest, as if it had turned to a solid crystal itself.


As I choked I suddenly saw myself hurling through space back to Earth, and apparently it was - some time before the plagues because the sky appeared blue and beautiful again. As my feet touched the grass beneath me, I realized that I had arrived a week before the plagues. And that I was supposed to find some REASON for them not to occur.


Then apparently the decision was not yet made to destroy all of mankind ? And that perhaps my weight of their 'good' could be ascertained in this time. What were the balances to the gods ? And as I looked around, it was if my sight could pass through all solid walls. Nothing was hidden from me. I still saw all of Earth, wracked in it's lover's bed of sin and desire.


And then I was standing outside my Dad's house again. I could hear the party had continued and there was the sound of polite drunken laughter. At once I thought to Lorraine. Was she really a demon ? Was it Being's way of testing me ? Perhaps I needed to rescue her from the impending doom upon the planet !


With this firm resolve, I reached forth to open the front door when it suddenly splintered, wood fragments flying in all directions and both blood and human body parts were flung asunder around me.


I was - horrified by what I was seeing. 'Lorraine' had grown in size and towered over what was once the roof of the house. How tall she was I had no idea. Words failed me so I just stared aghast at the carnage her sudden growth had caused.


Looking around me I saw bewildered party guests, several in serious condition from pieces of house having fallen on them or sharp smaller pieces skewered through them, screaming in agony and gasping in pain as they struggled for breath.


And then and there, Lorraine spoke down to me, and it was not so pretty a voice as it was before, "I waited and waited for you, David ! I have lost my patience, now see what you made me do !"


I stepped backwards, tripping over some rubble but got right back up and continued to walk away from her but not turning my back, "Lorraine, you are truly - evil ?"


I looked at her. She appeared to be the small young girl that she was earlier, if only so much larger in scale. Then she looked at me with her own fiery violet eyes, "Yes, David. I =AM= evil. But understand this. I want you. I want you very, very badly. Can't you feel it too ?"


I thought on her words for the moment, and it was as if a ticklish warmth had enveloped me, all over, as if I were burning up with a dizzy fever and I just wanted to go to sleep in the depths of her eyes. Her eyes were hypnotic and enchanting to me.


Lorraine continued, "I want to taste you, David. And you yourself WANT to be tasted. Do not deny yourself this pleasure !" She then rolled her tongue across her perfect white teeth and I felt my shoulders shake in both curiosity and fear.


Then she reached out directly for me ! I turned around to run away but I was caught firmly in her grasp. I struggled to wriggle free but she squeezed harder and I knew if I continued, she would kill me outright. I ceased fighting her.


Looking down at the wreckage she had caused, for a moment, I thought I saw the pretty Pakistan-Oriental girl crawling away, also bloody and broken from what happened. I struggled with new energy but she then placed a warm and very firm thumb over my head and pushed hard and my ears screamed in agony - letting me know it would go worse for me the more I resisted her.


And then she held me before her face and despite the fact I knew she was pure evil, she was beautiful to behold. As if she held the very best of mankind in her design. Her flawless red hair, dazzling violet eyes, and sensual red lips. I shuddered again and once she realized it was fear I was feeling and no longer struggling, she laughed.


"Let me taste you, David - NOW !"


And she placed me directly in her mouth !


I was worried at once for sharp teeth, but I couldn't see any. In fact, her mouth was completely alien from a human's own. There were three beautiful pink tongues, as big as I was, in a mobile bed of flesh and behind was a strange raised triangular protrusion from the front of her mouth that had weird hieroglyphics etched into it.


The middle tongue was forked and it grabbed roughtly at my clothes and sharply ripped them off and asunder, retracting and suddenly swallowing them as I bounced in her mouth, leaving me completely naked, except for my belt, which apparently the tongue could not remove.


The other two tongues suddenly mashed up against my chest and back, forcing me to lay down against them as if they were two massive pillows for my comfort.


I gasped in pleasure and knew I would be forced into doing something I didn't want if she continued. But then my brain thought onto things. Why is she doing this ? I must assume now she is a being of evil so what does she get out of this ?


And then my head hit on it.


Souls.


Souls - something that no living being had yet to artificially reproduce on it's own. Life. My ejaculation, like all of our Creator's precious beings, held the KEY TO CREATING LIFE. If evil truly wanted to collect souls, instead of killing me and gaining only one, why not pump out of me new souls, innocent and borne to the world - for evil's own appetite ?


And perhaps newborn souls were something to be desired far more than living matured ones ?


I groaned in despair at this and struggled to get up from the sticky wet tongues. But the 3rd tongue, dormant at this point was apparently hovering over me, for any sign of resistance, and when I showed it, the 2nd tongue vanished in the back of her throat as the 3rd coiled me up, like I was bent over a whipping post.


and then the forked tongue flattened out into a paddle and lashed down to SPANK me on my bare butt, hard too, several times, where I cried out in both pain and humiliation. And as I was spanked there was gentle laughter from Lorraine as if the whole thing was some kind of game to her and she was clearly enjoying the disgrace I felt from being whipped by her.


I realized each time I resisted, I would receive a sound spanking from this weird forked tongue, hard enough to make me cry until I was just wailing like a baby begging her to stop. But perhaps I could plan an escape somehow ?


I gave a sign of resistance again but this time as the forked tongue raised up to smack me on my butt again, I leapt around and grabbed it in both my arms and squeezed tightly, hoping to cause it to retract so I could escape out the mouth.


But it didn't, and I found quite quickly that it was immensely stronger than me. Seeing I was now trying to be clever, the tongue easily jumped free and coiled around my neck and squeezed.


I was blacking out so I - I reached out to caress it, to assuage it from killing me outright. Then I looked down and wincing my eyes in disgust - kissed it, and was surprised to find it delicious like hot cinnamon candy.


And apparently this pleased Lorraine for her forked tongue suddenly retracted back up in the air as one of the other tongues gripped me comfortably around my waist and held me in place. Then I heard a deep booming voice and it was hers, and one of smug confidence.


"Good. You know your place now. You've earned this." and as she spoke a wave of warm and sweet smelling saliva washed over me. She then held me with both tongues facing the opening and sucked and slurped the saliva off of me and the pleasure that created in my waist was extreme.


Then Lorraine spoke again in a choking voice and one full of ecstasy, "Delicious ! You will never run dry of your life liquor, David. I have seen to this. You will lay here for the rest of your LIFE receiving all the pleasures that I give you ! You have no concerns of your own - not ever again."


I thought on this for a moment. And then it was as if I could see her vanishing. As she was no longer on Earth but someplace else. Someplace 'designed' for her. And it was Lorraine and many other large giant women, if you could call them that. Each beautiful in their own way. Cradled by a form-fitting rock against the mathematically perfect ground.


And apparently each held a human in their mouths and were treating them the same way, extracting their life fluids. And it it was not all just women for men or vice-versa but clearly whatever was the sexual attraction for it's victims were.


It was like a factory or an assembly-line. It's sole purpose to squeeze new souls out of mortal men and women through this bizarre tongue-intercourse. And there was a weird screaming sound, like millions, literally millions of babies being born all at once - and the noise reverberated above the strange cloudless and pulsing blood-red sky.


But I would having nothing to do with this ! I struggled again but instead of being spanked, I was given an unusual injection by a tube.


And I was so dizzy and comfortable like I had never been before feeling as if I had to empty my bowels - my brain, they were one and the same ! And I heard Lorraine laugh again knowing all I could feel now was the pleasure it gave me.


I was content - to be an instrument used in this way now - for evil's purposes. When the tube pulled away, gobs of the chemical spewed out there was so much of it in me now. And I shuddered in pleasure, drowning in the warmth I felt, all the way down to my toes. I moaned and it reverberated all around me.


It was as if I was given the very best hot chocolate and my brain was savoring the taste of it, and I could no longer hear the screaming, and I drowned quite willingly in the fiery cinnamon of the chemical as I started to taste it in the back of my throat now, and I felt so sleepy. I just wanted to stay this way - as Lorraine suggested - forever.


But then something burned against my side. At first I ignored it. The burning sensation got stronger. Finally I looked to see the weird crystal-knife that I got when Being's bowl turned into this shape was holstered in my belt, like a weapon.


I saw how I could escape now. Taking the knife I jabbed hard into the tongue beneath me and I heard Lorraine howl in pain. The knife was like a voracious acid and burned against her, sizzling wildly causing more than enough room for me to escape from the bottom of her ruptured chin.


I looked and her massive body burned away rapidly. Apparently just a single thrust of this blade caused her to melt away at it. Truly good versus evil, and good having won in the end. All that remained of her was the whrr-chk-chk and I knew from all the years that I had seen it, if you faced it, really confronted it in your mind - it went away.


I imagined it's red writhing body being bound in hard chains. And then it vanished and I found myself outside the shattered house which was once my Dad's. People were raising up painfully from the wreckage. Firetrucks and ambulances were called and people gave me a weird look, and then at once I realized why.


I was not naked but wearing a beautiful white robe, clearly new, that was stained all over, of all things ! As if my own sins were there to make it dirty, visibly. And it was not a pretty sight. Plentiful white spattered stains were on the front of it, and horrible crap stained the back of it as if I didn't know how to go the bathroom yet.


I looked down at the ground glumly. Mankind after all, me especially, was not a pretty sight were you to remove all the veils and lies and tales and fantasies we shrouded and puffed ourselves up in. I started to walk away dejectedly when suddenly the wind picked up again. I knew I was going to be lifted back into the sky so I held my arms out, welcoming it, glad to not be abandoned.


And then I was aloft but it felt like something was dragging on me. I looked down to see someone from Dad's party was hanging on tightly to one of my legs ! A guest in a fine business suit.


I tried to shake him off but he grabbed harder and said, "I am going with you ! I will not die down here with the rest !"


And then it was like a beautiful crystal sheathed over me. Like form-fitting rubber, smelling curiously enough of strong peppermint and sandalwood and then my speed was increased. I looked down to my unwanted guest and saw that because he was not encased in the protective shell as I was, his body burned away against the friction of our atmosphere.


Screaming bones.


In seconds I was entering free space again.


I knew I was headed for the 'pocket' of Heaven again and I was already speaking out loud before I got there. "You - Being - I am so sorry ! I am so terribly sorry for what - well ... It felt good, you know ? I mean REALLY good and - I know it was wrong - it's just that - "


And my words faded away as I was caught by Being's hand but instead of being open palmed and friendly, the fingers were curled up, as if He was angry with me. In fear I reached over and kissed one of the fingers, which caused it to recede. I did this for all of them, but finally just hugged the thumb and held onto it.


I heard Him sigh, as if He knew this was the best and perhaps only way a human could apologize to a god, and clearly, it was not enough, "It is all right, little one. Few mortals can resist the Joaxchim."


"The - what ?"


"The Joaxchim. The Soul Eaters. They have long been in existence in your time, many taking mortal form."


"But - I don't understand. I mean, you made them right ? You made all living things. Aren't you - I mean - aren't you - "


The Being raised His voice, "For your sake, I am !"


And then Myria, that was the name of the Pakistan-Oriental girl I saw earlier. She was wearing the same robe as mine except hers was perfect and new. She suddenly bounded over as if her toes found floor in the sky. Then she reached over and gave me a nice hug.


And as she hugged me, the stains were washed away from my robe, like a soft beautiful wind full of gentle and melodious chimes all promising - NEW SPRING.


It is time. It is time to - unravel the tapestry at last."


And then it was as if there were little rocket-ships all leaving the Earth. Or at least I thought that was what it was because a moment later I realized it was chosen people, because they had the same protective sheathe over them I had earlier as they left the globe. And I counted them, quite easily I thought, and I realized it was 75 people in all.


And then all the beauty faded around me. The sky thundered a familiar percussion. I knew the rhythm well. It was time for my last and quite possibly, most painful lesson.


This was the [4th] plague.


Earth's atmosphere had a strange chemical reaction to the ever-mounting pollutants that had been accumulated for it since man first discovered fire and sent the poisonous soot into our clean air.


Our atmosphere turned solid, blocking all light, yet, before the people could panic at this, the sky cracked.  The sky was FALLING.  I laughed thinking of the silly childish story of Chicken Little in spite of the terrible danger this presented.


And this would be the final plague as the sky was huge, it was everywhere. There was no part of the Earth that was not covered by the sky. And then terrible gravity took place. There was an awful cracking and chipping sound that occurred. Almost painful to the ears. And people looked up to the sky for nearly an hour to see small finger-like chunks fall down, revealing the sun beyond.


And then I saw that strange building again in the South Pole.

And then I was him !


I was pushing my way through the snowstorm to this forbidden building and saw the sky falling around me. I knew if I could reach it, I would be safe from the plagues. And then I was running top speed towards it, the snow crunching beneath my expensive winter boots, and then a piece of the sky hit my head, but it did not stop, it was so heavy and sharp that it cut straight through my head to my abdomen.


I was trying to think if this was painful for a second, and then realized that my brain was cut in two, separated, so I was FORBIDDEN from having any thoughts about pain for a second. Then I fell down into the snow and knew no more. After a moment of realizing that I was incapable of thinking, I was removed from the terrible scene again.


And the building itself changed. There was a high-powered laser bouncing off Beryllium at least 1-mile underground, deep within it's catacombs. The perfect and final experimental science of man, to end our age of steam, steel, electricity, and oil.


Mirrors carefully placed at exact locations, added to the laser's ability, gaining from all the precious metals it reverberated off of. Creating a resonant harmonic effect. A warping of reality. A crude magic that while they didn't understand, they didn't need to - it merely - worked.


A strange type of growth appeared beneath the building and lifted up the entire structure and curled around it, growing more voracious with each second. The building was tilted on it's side, a full 90-degrees and it continued to rotate. Faster and faster in the grip of this alien undergrowth.


The rough magic continued. A complete blasphemy of all the laws of science and reality.


And as it rotated the building grew smaller, like an optical illusion that it was retreating, that it was fleeing from what was happening around it. And perhaps it was.


As for the Earth itself, it appeared to be shrinking as the weight of the entire sky crushed well beyond it's surface but hundreds of miles deep into the Earth's crust. There was some kind of strange catalytic reaction as the "glass" of the sky contacted the absolute Earth's core and an explosion exceeding a billion nuclear weapons started a chain reaction which ultimately blew away the entire planet.


This whole thing occurred within just a few hours !


Only the prettiness of the stars yielding to other galaxies surrounded the airless vapors that once were my home.


I swallowed hard after a good moment of deathly silence, "Ahhm, that's it ?"


The Being boomed out it's voice, "Yes ! Now it is YOUR TIME !"


I was fearful now, "Time of my judgement ?"


The Being continued it's loud voice, "No ! You have judged yourself through the years of your life and you have proven to me that you are more than fair and responsible for your own destination, as a child. No, I am tired. It is your time. Create the NEW WORLD for you and your companion, Myria, and let me - sleep. I am so very tired."

And then he spoke as if reciting from an ancient prayer book. It was as if the words were known by man and had been for centuries, but their meanings were perverted and changed and reconfigured to mankind's reticent and manipulative ways. Was it any wonder we were blind in the wilderness !


"It was shapeless and without form ..."


As He spoke an amorphous silvery blue glob of substance like clay appeared and floated before me. I grasped it in my hands and started to make it round and could see new clouds appearing on it when -


- The alarm to my alarm clock went off -

- I woke at 7am - and my dream, the incredible dream I had was finally over -


The strange music I heard while I was in Being's domain

For we know we are His children
and He comes to our life of sin.
Come to Him like innocent bornings
he wipes our tears, and painful mournings.

New Dawn has come TODAY !
AWAKE to meet his WAY !
Repent ! For your hour is at hand !
Repent ! Join our holy band !


(repeats)




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loved it. a happy ending:)

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dw817

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You're not supposed to get the meaning, lass. I'm just teasin' ya. :3 Basically it means, "I'm not s.. read more
The dark story

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ohhohoohoh....but i wasn't teased in anyway :p
dw817

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I guess I've hung around Chris too long. He is the ultimate ULTIMATE straight-faced guy. Very little.. read more
Yay! I totally enjoyed this chapter! :3

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Good deal - and - that's the end of the dream ! While I had additional prophetic dreams later, none .. read more
Ellie EM

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Okays goods! ^^

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