Cries From A Broken Heart

Cries From A Broken Heart

A Poem by Angie Diane♥♥

Little tiny needles,
Entered one by one,
Into my heart,
Tearing more and more deeply,
Each one cutting a piece of you from me.

I don't want the memories,
It just hurts now,
I loved you too much,
But I was foolish to ever think...
You would ever truly love me.

I guess I'm wrong...
As always...
I'm nothing more than an empty shell now.
So hollow...
I shouldn't have loved you...

I feel like an idiot...
Nothing more than an idiot...

© 2015 Angie Diane♥♥



Author's Note

Angie Diane♥♥
This is just how I feel right now....and I just don't think I deserved what I did, but I guess this pain will just make me stronger. Just gotta say. Thanks for leading me on hun. I love you too...

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Im reviewing this in January 2015 and I wonder if things have gotten any easier - you dont have to answer - Im just pondering.
The message of the pain and continued pain was conveyed very well.
The heart wants what it wants and well ..its in control sometimes and leads us into very choppy waters like a drunken ships captain - imbibed by the love (or the perceived love) of another.

This poem really inspired me Angie Diane, a pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing :)




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem.
They have gotten a little easier. He knows.. read more
ANTO

2 Years Ago

Aww - its a learning curve all round then - all good - Im glad for you both :)
Angie Diane♥♥

2 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
We are friends. That's all I'm happy about. :)



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I was expecting more from this poem. I liked it, but I wanted more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is a great piece of work! I can really relate to this as well, Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Jamie

2 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Im reviewing this in January 2015 and I wonder if things have gotten any easier - you dont have to answer - Im just pondering.
The message of the pain and continued pain was conveyed very well.
The heart wants what it wants and well ..its in control sometimes and leads us into very choppy waters like a drunken ships captain - imbibed by the love (or the perceived love) of another.

This poem really inspired me Angie Diane, a pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing :)




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem.
They have gotten a little easier. He knows.. read more
ANTO

2 Years Ago

Aww - its a learning curve all round then - all good - Im glad for you both :)
Angie Diane♥♥

2 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
We are friends. That's all I'm happy about. :)
I can tell that came from a different. Keep writing, i felt that.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great read. I really liked it. The great problems of love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and strong. The first stanza was outstanding and my favorite part. Great illustration and imagery of the pain felt.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Little tiny needles,
Entered one by one,
Into my heart,"

i love this, its deep. great job!



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

touching...beautiful piece of poetry... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aw this is heartfelt and emotional. wonderful

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this and can totally relate.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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