The Blank Stare

The Blank Stare

A Poem by Therene
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Staring blankly doesn't mean being clueless

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I stare
You scold me
I've an idle mind you say
But deep within you know what I'm thinking

You snap
I recoil in fear
You've a frightful temper
But deep within I know what you're feeling

A blank stare
It is not thoughtless
It is placid, tranquil, and wanderlust
In the depths of our minds, we speak without words


© 2011 Therene



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vissions perceive truth the dreamstate of words
spoken silently quiet and awhisper steal my heart
evry time i see you

Posted 10 Months Ago


So if idle hands are the devil's playthings, what are idle minds?

This is actually...really good. It's simple, direct, and has a perfect build up to an excellent ending. I wouldn't change a damn thing.

Well done you.

Okay, maybe one thing. Since when is wanderlust a noun? Or even a word at all?

Posted 6 Years Ago



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A Poem by Therene