divergent

You'll have a free-flowing great time. Sometimes I vomit a lot at once

I remember a lot of

the ends of the middle

reason nor no rhyme

what's on my mind?

 

It’s was never time

The drudgery of the day

tapped into sum ones’ brain

Ohhh… How I must stain.

 

It was not a slight refrain

something that you would sing.

As some would just to stay sane.

 

WAIT A MINUTE!!!!!

 

‘Cause I think I can

I know I can, unleash the pain

In a morbid soul

 

And I dream the pain

Down Dark Waters

carry me fro.

 

I have lost and never found

What was I to say

The pain still strong

of all that has gone wrong

and the guilt inside hurts

the pain.

 

We have searched high and low for truths unknown and it was I that shot you down, but I was too late.  It was not you.

 

I know, I know it wasn’t you, it was me and 

now I see, who could it be?

 

I walk away...away walk I

I have led it astray

from the vein

 

I have tapped into the others they know my secrets now

It came across in a folder with a name and no contents

I was to search for this person yet to be.

Reviews

[Rylan Leif]

I really enjoy how there isn't a "standard" form of poetry that you stick to. You don't keep even stanzas or pattern within the lines and it's so different and very refreshing. I think it gives a really unique flow to this piece.
"I walk away...away walk I" is my favourite line, I like how the two halves are identically mirrored across the ellipses.

Lovely work!

[Kailor Mason]

The trouble with walking alone is when you fall and get injured . . . and no one can hear you cry out for help

[Scottlehem]

I love the complex in this eatmills' poem:

"I have lost and never found
What was I to say
The pain still strong
of all that has gone wrong
and the guilt inside hurts
the pain."

and that was the short of it.

Thanks

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[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your expressive and creative work..Sunflower/Sara

[BikerAngie]

Awesome write I wish I had your talent.