Sweet sacred soul

Sweet sacred soul

A Poem by Echoes of Eros
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hush hush hush... xo

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Hush hush,

sweet sacred soul.

White winter’s kiss did burn

in echoes of dust and gold;

a fabric woven in laced stone.

Sweet wine now passion unleashes

for her eyes, sky blue azure glow

are pools of spiced mystery.

Eloquence of black turquoise ripples

and pink-laced lingerie summers

are enveloped in the scent of relics.

There are breathing books on the shelf;

pages of winding staircases and

whispers transcribed on her soft skin.

Sweet sterling etched Scottish shadows

make love within these purple mountains,

caught on memory’s frantic photography.

It hints at wild horses sipping trickling streams

in those ancient forests of untamed fairies,

and how they murmur lullabies

of hush hush hush…


© 2015 Echoes of Eros



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soothing, breathless.... your passion is clear and admired by all. this poem seems to tell a story of passion, the winters kiss, spiced memories, lullabies, the hush. it all fits together. great job

Posted 7 Months Ago


Echoes of Eros

7 Months Ago

I am so thankful for your precious words. This is all dream fabric right now, but sometimes living i.. read more
My, my, this is extraordinary! From the "white winter's kiss" to the "ancient forests of untamed fairies", I was held captive.

I have never read you before, but this is as good of a place as any to start!



Posted 2 Years Ago


Sweet friend, that was melodic lullaby to my ears. With every word and every line, I felt more and more appeased and tamed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

So pleased the music could bring you into a place of bliss, Nadia. Thank you so much. xo
beautiful writing. the kind you want to curl up with on rainy days and sip out of a cup to warm your soul. I found myself rereading these words and holding them in. This is truly awesome. One of my favorites

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

Makes my heart smile. Thank you very much, Crystal. xo
Sweet wine now passion unleashes
for her eyes, sky blue azure glow
are pools of spiced mystery.

So much enticing imagery here. The thoughts of summer coming and desire being released are what capture me in this piece.

xxoxx

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely :) it makes your mind dance

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

I love the thought of a mind dancing. Thank you, dear lillythorn. xo
lillythorn

2 Years Ago

It's a beautiful thing :)
You combine sensuality with beauty and bring forth a creation of passion that lingers with the reader for a very long time. Every write of yours has this special quality.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

Divya, you always leave such warmth and light with your reviews. Blessed are those who walk beside y.. read more
The images you have created are breathtaking, but what I love most about this poem is the softness of your words - graceful and elegant. A stunning poem!

:) Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

Dear Julie, your words lift me up above the chill of this cold autumn day. May more than the cold ta.. read more
Hush… hush…
There’s no rush
For thy and I
Plenty of time
To say goodbye
So, stay by me
And sing me a lullaby…


Sorry about my naïve poetic intrusion, but it came right to my mind as a reply to your beautiful and sweet loving poem. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

I do so love your poetic inspirations flowing down the page! And truly appreciate your reflections a.. read more
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Wow. This was so well done and perfect.

It pulled me in and kept me there with visions of love and longing.
The imagery is so fantastic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

2 Years Ago

Cor! I really appreciate you here. Thanks for reading and for sharing your heart. xo

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