The you in lonely.

With joyful steps he crosses the mire,

dutifully following the essence of desire. 

There's light at the end he can faintly see,

desire ensures him of awaiting beauty.

For him?

When he looks to his feet sorrow appears,

the boggy floor negating desires cheers.

It's hard to look up and see the way,

some find it easier if they stop and pray.

But not him.

All of a sudden stood right by his side,

family and friends to help him glide.

They pick up his head and point to the light,

he takes a deep breath, he can beat this plight.

Only with them!

Reviews

[splattercore]

When you have the warmth and comfort of knowing there are people present, you are never truly alone. Even if they're there in spirit.

[misha]

Great job on this piece. =)

[floarealbastra10]

very inspiring

[Cheyenne16]

this is really good