memorium

kinyu

he reminded me

of my grandfather, and he

was younger than me

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

Very complete, three lines have told me all I need to see. It was wonderful.

[Ed Hart]

thank you Cherrie...i try not to take up too much time...so many people tend to charge extra...

[Cherrie Palmer]

I agree short and sweet is best

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this could mean several things....in a good way...he has the personality of my grandfather---all the things i like about him....
or he acts way too old and conservative for his age.

either way, or any other way...this poem speaks volumes and could be several different books at once.

[Ed Hart]

thank you jacob, you always catch a wider view

[. serah .]

-- wow... -- brevity and simplicity work remarkably well for this piece... -- from where i'm looking, this poem is telling me that the numerical age of a person doesn't really matter... and that anyone could remind one of anyone if one is suitably alert and self-aware...

[Ed Hart]

i tend to go easy on the fools i meet, they remind me so much of what i see in the mirror...thank you serah

[. serah .]

-- haha... you're too funny, Maestro Ed... :p -- and... you're very welcome... :)