lamp off

a good poem is better than a box of chocolates, and should be visited as often

glasses

on the drowsy book

ghost poems

drift in and out

inner vistas open

the neighborhood of stars

that quickly shed

what can be known

Reviews

[Death's Poet]

I really like this. It was short, almost spooky and it nailed your point in a small number of lines. Writing a poem that has this much movement in such a small quantity of words is difficult for even the most seasoned writer or poet. Hats off to you good fellow. I am impressed I must admit

[Ed Hart]

thank you for your kindly comment

[Beccy]

I can only add, 'in vino veritas.'

Beccy.

[Ed Hart]

i always found it helpful, throwing in the chocolates and the ladies...

[Terpsichore]

Wonderful read; and love your reply to Beccy. I'm trying to figure out a suitable word. :)

T

PS. Too many words, but a perfect sentiment; 'Language is wine upon the lips.' ~Virginia Woolf

[Ed Hart]

Thank you Mr T...somewhere Shakespeare or Vermeer must have coursed close...maybe even Renoir...what have we started here?

[Beccy]

Must confess; chocolates, a glass of red and most important of all, a book of poetry. My idea of heaven.

Beccy.

[Ed Hart]

there should be one word that includes all four in its meaning, the chocolate, the wine, the poetry, and the lady...somewhere there must be a painting of it

[emmajoy]

Bliss.

Across space -- will find one for you. .

[. serah .]

-- you are brilliant at writing micro epics... -- this particular one is like a deeply moving symphony one could listen to forever...

[Ed Hart]

'micro epics', sounds like something to cure indigestion...well, isn't it exactly that...thank you serah

[. serah .]

-- haha... yeah... indigestion issues of the mind... :p -- you're very welcome...