invisibly

like the splines of gears

dedicating tomorrow

events spin events

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

Ah...Mandala...I no longer abide too much by way of mechanical device...each rotation gluttonously feasting on a monster sourced in fossil fuel...so circulatory...like each device is fitted with its own personal doomsday clock...when I sleep...I hear them cogitate in an invisible conspiracy. My busy mind has eyes...it knows how stories go and how they often end. Of course, I'm riffing here on the back of the End Hart inspiration train...thank the stars you are accustomed to my idiosyncracies.

[Ed Hart]

idiosyncrasies can make for lonely nights, even if you have company

[alan peter kelly]

Being idiosyncratic doesn't hold a monopoly on loneliness....I can feel alone in a crowded room.

[barleygirl]

Very original way to illustrate the ole hamster wheel in only a few meaning-packed words! Reading it further than the everyday merry-go-round, we can also imagine the constant interconnectedness that's symbolized by gears. Love this stark word picture.

[Ed Hart]

i'm glad you liked

[SkinlessFrank]

those gears.....crushing they are

[Ed Hart]

it's not so bad, if we allow it to happen...remember all those early crushes, and how crushing they were...

[boblakin]

What's writ is writ; be interesting if we could change things rather than just think we can.

[Ed Hart]

interesting, what you say, and true

[iand63]

As they spin my head, nice one Ed

[Ed Hart]

we call it history, but it's actually foundation...all just names, of course

[. serah .]

-- and no one can write eventful profundities as skilfully as you... -- this too is a fantastic micro epic, Maestro Ed...

[Ed Hart]

Pat says i have to stop pinning your comments on the walls, especially the refrigerator

[. serah .]

-- haha... both of you are adorable... -- my comments simply record the brilliance i witness... :)