A Poem by Edward kipkirui

it celebrates the iconic figure in my life

you amaze me with your humane form
even with little soap you foam
under the sun you've done lots of stuff
to ensure that we don't starve

you whipped me severally with your cane
to ensure that I don't blunder like Cain
forsaking your natural wont you're a beast
yet you still remain the best

many times you say 'go make me proud'
yet you lead by example in broad
I've used your guidance in the past
because you cleaned me like tooth paste

we love and adore you greatly
though we may have not shown lately
we respect you from now and for good
because you're our second god from God

© 2015 Edward kipkirui

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Edward kipkirui
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Strong and good words for mama.
"we respect you from now and for good
because you're our second god from God"
I liked the reason and the purpose for the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Nice prospective, the hand that disciplines us and cares for us and guides us just as well be considered a God for the miraculous things they accomplish within us. Bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago

I feel like I owe her my life

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on September 27, 2015
Last Updated on September 27, 2015
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Edward kipkirui
Edward kipkirui

eldoret , bomet , Kenya

my name is Edward kipkirui and am student at the University of eldoret pursuing bachelor of Science in information technology more..


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