when the penned dance

when penned dance

Thoughtfully for something inside of me

try to think without a logical mind

find the piece of words to describe

what should or shouldn't do find

 

when the ink drop into the paper

penned dancing with lines at my finger

moving up and down, make a circle and go round

sketch on the blank page with words that found

 

sounds of pens  in the piece of paper

like carving a moment into words

one by one in each line with caption of nature

finding more idea that could  afford

 

time seems to go fast without recognize 

from the morning into dawn,  sunrise into the sunset

 much more things to write

the penned, still want to dance

 

12th June 2014

@Edward Lancheister

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sounds just like a poet I simply love this.



My favorite stanza's lines here.


Thoughtfully for something inside of me

try to think without a logical mind

find the piece of words to describe

what should or shouldn't do find



when the ink drop into the paper

penned dancing with lines at my finger

moving up and down, make a circle and go round

sketch on the blank page with words that found


Thank you for sharing this and your lovely review
and comment you left on my page.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Benita for stop by and read the poem, nice review. bless

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure my friend. you're very welcome. blessings. kindred poet

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Amazing work here. You exhibit the wisdom of the ages.
Especially like>
when the ink drop into the paper
penned dancing with lines at my finger
moving up and down, make a circle and go round
sketch on the blank page with words that found

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you for the review and get the beauty of the poem :)

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

My pleasure.

[Frieda P]

Reads as a poets poem, round and round we go, what we'll write about, even we don't know some days. Nice job Edward, I enjoyed the dance.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Frieda, i believe you can see it too by yourself, when you write on the piece or paper and watch the penned dance with her beauty :)