The Woman

This is for the one who is yet to come.

Her laughter sounds like thousand symphonies,
Her smile brings the world alive,
With big twinkling eyes forever talking,
Lords best work making the universe swoon with pride,
She is not an option, neither a choice,
She is my journey, destiny and vice,
Worthy of being called an absolute personification of perfection,
Her serenity leads to road of redemption,
Her beauty makes my heart skip a beat,
Even Aphrodite so jealous does nothing but weep,
Her voice so sweet like an angel's whisper,
Her delicate touch would make even the cold whimper,
Her presence alone makes a difference to the world,
Her love is like heaven on earth,
Her words like delicate pearls of rarity,
She is a wonder of unimaginable delicacy,
She fills the heart with ecstatic elation,
Her elegance defines the meaning of transcendence,
Sometimes wonder what I want from her,
I say,
"smile pretty,
Make the world shine,
I'll know when you do,
because there will be light".

Author's Note

This is for the one who is yet to come.

Reviews

[@zeewhykay]

Ah.. Writing about the one who is yet to come, oh how we long to connect deeply as humans. This is what writing is all about. Your piece evokes different images for different people, but with your own personal words. Just thinking about what you may see when you write this, and what I see when I read it, and the next person, and the next... All different in their similiarities. I very well did appreciate this piece, Thank you for this. Cheers !

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you Yann for the kind words. And yes, we yearn for that connection for dust is life without love. Your comment inspires.

[PegMan]

Wow, some adulation here in these words. Interesting that it's written for the one who is yet to come. The images of her are so strong and sensuous. She has it all, including talking eyes (the best kind, for they speak with the most clarity).

You've packed so much into this. I'd like to see more with less, because some of it starts the imagination up, and leaves it wanting, which is okay, if that's what you meant. For example "Her serenity leads to road of redemption" leaves me wanting, makes me curious...like even one more like to develop a context. Because after all redemption is a big deal and worthy of another detail or so.

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you sir for your kind words. Whenever I find the motivation and inspiration next will try and redo.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Breathtakingly beautiful simply Beautiful.

Lovely Write thank you for sharing. Kindred poet

Beautiful lines I loved these.

Her laughter sounds like thousand symphonies,
Her smile brings the world alive,

Even Aphrodite so jealous does nothing but weep,
Her voice so sweet like an angel's whisper,

I know that Aphrodite isn't a real god but I
know of Greek mythology amazing how
you Brought this to life.

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you sir for your kind words.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am a Ma'm not a sir. I am female but never been called sir it is a honest
mistake but no worries and thankful it doesn't happen in public
but you're are very welcome blessings Kindred poet

[W. C. Forrest]

Am so very sorry.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's ok I think it is my Name that I use and being that there
is strong woman in my family it's the vib some get but not always
I have made that mistake with others so it's ok. Blessings Kindred poet

[Spacecadet]

This is the perfect depiction of a mind blurred by loves beauty, when everything is so joyous and serene. The flow of this poem is beautiful and the words bring out vivid imagery which is always enjoyable.
Amazing job here, Eeshan :)

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you spacecadet for the time, patience and endurance to read and review. Love is indeed beautiful and allows us to see the world as it truly is, colossal wonder.

[Blood Ink Diary]

Ah, she sounds so extravagant and charming, so lovely !
Certainly relished this enchanting poem ! Cheers

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Ah, this poem is as gorgeous as the woman you illustrate here so passionately. I loved every well crafted line... so beautiful, the muse for such a piece as this, is lucky indeed. :) I will be back to read more soon.

[W. C. Forrest]

Thank you. Delighted you enjoyed reading.

[Wynter Ignatius]

This is the kind of thing I would like to write for a woman I love.

Beautiful piece for an obviously a beautiful woman in your eyes. The ending is a simple way to say more than what the words add up to.

Keep it up and I'll keep reading.

[W. C. Forrest]

We are incomplete without the presence of 'The One' in our lives and to give tribute to them through words no matter how few is the least we can do. Glad you savoured my humble offering.

[Wynter Ignatius]

Far from a humble offering my friend.