Raindrops

Raindrops

A Poem by Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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Summer Haiku

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The rain was salty
As it ran cold by my lips
Fused with my own tears

© 2016 Elizabeth J. Gelinger


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The rain was salty
As it ran cold by my lips
Fused with my own tears
Touch to me, with nice feelings
such touch feel with realized me
Every where is happiness
Need it only recognized it.





Posted 7 Years Ago
want to get your permission for add 3 lines in your poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth J. Gelinger

7 Years Ago

Sure, why not?

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Added on May 17, 2016
Last Updated on May 17, 2016
Tags: rain, cold, lips, raindrops, poem, poetry, haiku, summer

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Elizabeth J. Gelinger
Elizabeth J. Gelinger

Pasadena , MD



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