WIDE OPEN SPACES

WIDE OPEN SPACES

A Poem by kitty
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Freedom comes at a price. Any chance you get ~ grab it with both hands and value it!

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                             WIDE OPEN SPACES
"Take me to those wide open spaces that I love ~
                 don't fence me in!"
Sunrise upon the dew- gives life and vogor as we
                start anew >>>
praising our God for all He has given to us -
the birds, the bees, the wind through the trees.
                in Him we trust   
Conservationists are happy - all dangers prevent
working tirelessly with equipment they invent.
Birds and wildlife - grateful for life ...
for preditors roam - no fun but strife.
Nature calls in a bid to cull or to save
washed up by tide or the swelling wave.
In Velds and Savannahs a trail will be paved
only the brave or the cunning will be saved.
Look across these spaces - living form seems lost
one akward or careless move will come at a cost!
Wide Open Spaces ~ liberty is seen
A grip of the stirrup, or hands firmly on the wheel
appreciating the dust trail or praising the green!
Created @ 9.10 AM Sunday 12th November 2017

© 2017 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Yearning for freedom from daily routine, we seek imaginary spaces to reflect/recollect!

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Your style I will always admire! it's just so enjoyable to read, someone can read them everyday smoothly, always a thought of a greater matter they hold, I like here how I feel like from loving one person Your fly through the spaces appreciating life... dreamy spiritual poem, Thank You, and happy weekend sweet Kitty*

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

A 'Tom Boy' as a child loving 'Western' movies. That's where that is coming from. ..Hence my creatin.. read more
kitty

6 Years Ago

You are so kind in your reviews of my simple pieces. Look forward to reading your reviews/opinion on.. read more
lightsong

6 Years Ago

It was Your style not Your "stukre"!!! these typing mistakes really annoying, specially when I'm on .. read more



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I really need those WIDE OPEN SPACE kitty. praising the green! Offcourse...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

You'd have to Go to Canada. Parts of the US and France. GB is a bit 'closed in'. Now the 'green' is .. read more
Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

I will definitely make a note of it. :) Thanks friend :)
Give me land lots of land, lovely subject Kitty, trouble is we are filling up many wide open spaces with buildings now. Mother Nature must be losing the will to live due to the way we are invading all of her breeding sights. Guess we have had the best lives. take care Rod.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Comments/reviews greatly valued my friend. How beautiful are those 'wide open spaces' especially fro.. read more
Your style I will always admire! it's just so enjoyable to read, someone can read them everyday smoothly, always a thought of a greater matter they hold, I like here how I feel like from loving one person Your fly through the spaces appreciating life... dreamy spiritual poem, Thank You, and happy weekend sweet Kitty*

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

A 'Tom Boy' as a child loving 'Western' movies. That's where that is coming from. ..Hence my creatin.. read more
kitty

6 Years Ago

You are so kind in your reviews of my simple pieces. Look forward to reading your reviews/opinion on.. read more
lightsong

6 Years Ago

It was Your style not Your "stukre"!!! these typing mistakes really annoying, specially when I'm on .. read more

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Added on November 18, 2017
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kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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Mature writer. Would like to explore the possibility of posting small humble pieces on this site. Have self published and am seeking further advancement of of recent creations. more..

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