BATTLESHIP

Just a word triggers a thought: triggers a poem.

                                             BATTLESHIP

Masters of the sea

Naval protection for U and me.

Rise with the tide ~~~>>>

show omnipotence and velocity as you ride!

Speedy target, keenest eye

Riding waves over deepest ocean bed.

Come what may, men with steely nerve

A sacrafice to each and every head.

Seconds count when lives are at stake

take command at helm, for goodness sake!

To you we salute, men and women 

              of courage and determination

serving their country and the nation.

Created @ 8.45pm on Saturday 9th 2018

Author's Note

Just a little 'Quickie' for a casual read.

Reviews

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The Battleship has long been a corner stone of military might, no more evident than the battles at sea during WW2. The way the modern age of warfare has advanced the Battleship seems to has lost some of its relevance in the face of air superiority and drone technology. Nevertheless, they are magnificent vessels and still the true ruler of the oceans.

This is a fine little tribute to them and all who served upon them. Nice work.

[kitty]

Thank you so much for an excellent review. Much appreciated.

[Stella Armour]

We are an island nation and have always had the sea to protect us from invaders; the sailors ride on and below the waves to keep us safe from invaders.
With the onset of radar tracking enemy ships and subs became even a more skilled job; these wonderful men and women risk treacherous situations on the sea to keep us and our little island safe.

[kitty]

We are eternally grateful for their selflessness.

[송지ፏ..]

Very nice. Some of the words I had to look up but it was great! I recently finished my mandatory military service in the army, not the navy

[kitty]

Much respect to those who take it on themselves to 'serve' their country.Thank you for being there. A very good week to you.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks, though all men here in South Korean are required to do it for two years. It was fun at times even though I always got yelled at lol

[kitty]

life is for living. live it as best you can!

[matelotrod]

Took me back to my early days Kitty. Memory jogger and very much appreciated that you find the time and expertise to sing their praises. I will say Thankyou for all of us ex-matelots and thanks for putting it into rhyme. take care, Rod.

[kitty]

So glad to se you on page Lord Admiral! I must confess that it was you I had in mind when I wrote this little piece but of course forgot to say so, sorry!

[matelotrod]

having a bit of a tough time at the moment Kitty, health wise. Er-indoors has the old ladies Breast Cancer and I have been diagnosed with possible Lung cancer. We always share everything !!

[kitty]

Two hearts that beat as one. May your sadness be only temporary!

[matelotrod]

Thankyou kitty, we will make it I promise.

[kitty]

The way to do it!

[lightsong]

The Navy, something really special, Your wonderful tribute to them is like a theme song, I can imagine these words being sung along the sea winds...

[kitty]

I so appreciate you comments on these humble pieces I throw on board. Thank you a million times. You are that true 'friend' Have a lovely week.

[lightsong]

Dear Kitty, You are so warmly welcome, this one feels like a real Navy song, more than a "humble" piece.

a most wonderful week I wish for You too~

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a wonderful tribute to our naval people...and how we are protected by them...the only thing that bothered me was the "U"---text language...
not for poetry...
but a really nice thank you to them.

[kitty]

Thank you Joseph. I do appreciate constructive feedback. I will try to go in and make corrections. Was unsure of how shortened, but now acceptable modern form would be acceptable to some readers. Thank you for speaking out!

[kitty]

Another Error spotted! Correction on calling you Joseph! A thousand apologies Jacob would be humbly accepted. I expect you will make me pay eh! ?Forgiven?