ENCHANTRESS

Poetry is what I write. I will not profess training in the field but will write as I am inspired be it just for casual reading; I am yet to be formally trained! Make of it what you may. Critique welco

                        ENCHANTRESS

Quan Yen ...

In her darkest pain ... compassion felt.

Spiritual healing ~ hear the beat of her heart,

feel the heat of her passion drumming through

                         her mind,

lifting her up to the highest heavens.

Om Mani Ho ...

Goddess of love take her to a different realm.

Among petals she softly treads, releasing fragrant perfumes.

The drums ~ they echo through the portals of her heart

                    making her whole again.

Chant enchantress~ call her lover to her!

Spirit of the gods ~ take her home where her lover she can see!

Hiyaho eehee, eehee ...

Bring her lover, let him be!

Ah Ham ... 

Divine love, listen, listen to the beat of her heart

       as she transcends into his space.

Heaven alone bears the beauty of his face.

Walking on the clouds of love,

taken to the heavens above.

Lifted up only by the power of love.

Purest, whitest dove shows her how to fly

                 above the  sky on high:

Angels raise your voices, help her Master and their king.

In crescendo ~ tongues of fire burn their passion

with strongest energy so love becomes the purest treasure!

created @ 7.15pm Saturday 16th June 2018

Author's Note

Was inspired in a sacred space during an evening of spiritual enlightenment. I aimed for the piece to be taken in context only - in ignorance of the true significance of some of the chants. No offence meant,

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Kitty!
How more beautifully alluring and appealingly rendered a poem in Free Style could be composed, I cannot imagine.
You imagery and passion alone are virtually incomparable, not to mention the sweetly touching originality of your enchanting poetic voice.
The required increase of pace in heartbeat and breathing exercises can easily be met while reading and feeling the nuances that so warmly and smoothly flow throughout every line and verse, up off the page into one's core.
Your chants add a mysteriously ethereal touch that enchant like a magic spell.

I could go on, but why weary your eyes and overstay my welcome?
Suffice it to say, "I'm stunned!" ⁓ Richard : )

[kitty]

Thank you m'lord for this wonderful review of what I consider to be a very humble piece, written from the heart (where else?) for its only from there(and mind) that I can ever hope to connect with my imaginary lover...to make real my feelings. I sometimes wonder at the power of the gods to inspire these 'simple pieces' through this unknown writer's pen.

[Richard🖌]

Imagination can be a powerful device.

[kitty]

Too right!