WHEN ...

Making assurances sure.

            

WHEN ...

you take my hand ~ holding it tight

               everything seems so right.

Upon soft petals I gently tread ...

I am cohersed into a world of make believe,

                       I am safely led.

you hold my hand ~ a gentle squeeze

the world outside, no fear in me:

   my heart, it beats in harmony.

you take my hand ~ I feel secure:

       senses keen, I seek no more:

earth, clouds and skies becomes a trilogy.

you hold my hand ~ you know the score

the world at large is one of trust

peace is found: life and living becomes a must.

We now hold hands ~ so plain to see

man and woman ~ the greatest chemestry.

Created @ 8.15am on Saturday 30th June 2018

Author's Note

At times one feels grateful to be alive. Life can take on a different meaning. We hold on to a feeling of security, if only for a passing moment in time.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i absolutely love this ... you seem to have a very natural sense of rhythm and rhyme that blends your words and lines beautifully ..the same gentleness i sensed in your first post here is in this one as well ... i can feel the comfort of that hand ...and your poem is quite universal and can be taken on many levels of love and friendships ... but especially, for me, the comfort and assurance i find in our Creator God ... beautifully said kitty...so nice to have met you
E.

[kitty]

Pleasures mine. Delighted to make your acquaintance. Frank and clear reviews. Much appreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

That wonderful feeling of security can come when you are in a loving relationship. Holding hands, helps that. Nicely expressed kitty.

Chris

[kitty]

Thank you for a lovely review. Nice to have that loving feeling that makes one feel secure.

[Chris Shaw]

It is indeed kitty.

[Onlyme]

Lovely understand assurance of being reassured. Poetically sweet and beautiful expressed.

[kitty]

Thank you so much Dee for this visit. Much apreciated!

[Stella Armour]

Love as it should be, two people feeling safe and secure with each other, so much that nothing else can come between them... lovely Kitty :)

[kitty]

This was written with a wonderful 'friend' and his lovely wife who lives on the north eastern side of England. Thank you for recognising the fact!

[Stella Armour]

ah, i wondered who it might be ...i hope she loves this poem :)

[matelotrod]

This is the Kitty that I know, really lovely piece, both you and the poem. You certainly know how to make enjoyment for the readers Kitty. The last line says it all man and woman- the greatest chemistry. take care My Lovely Rod.

[kitty]

Great to see you on page my dear friend. Hope you an Er in doors are getting there! Big hugs! Thanks for your support. Have a good week.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ahhh..very sweet... lovely thoughts

Well done...

Jazzy

[kitty]

Thank you JJ. Your input on this is great. You come to the reality that life isn't that bad after all!

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome........:0)..........