POLE POSITION

POLE POSITION

A Poem by kitty
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'Triggered' by Formula 1's Lewis Hamilton ( Racings driver's win)

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                             POLE POSITION
No competition there!
She won fair and square.
As a novice, she entered the race
in a bet ~ she had to save face.
As a challenger, the odds were stacked
She owned the best chasis on track!
The course was long and tough
Of teasing - she had had enough.
Competition grew stiff ~ was up against the best!
Endurance and gaul was put to test.
Many pitfalls along the way
Much critique - much too much, you'd say!
She clung on tight, with all her might
           and did it her way!
Created @ 6.30AM Sunday 20th October 2018

© 2018 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Funny how that mischevious 'Muse' can tempt a writer to be frivalous!

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Loved this one Kitty old friend, sorry I haven't been very active for a while but things are improving according to the Doc' Change from Chemo to Radio therapy and see what happens. You always had pole position for all the time I've known you. take care Rod.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

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The best way to do it Kitty , Frank Sinatra would agree with you x

Posted 5 Years Ago


I am a formula one fan kitty, so I got this straight away. Also a huge admirer of Lewis Hamilton. I will certainly get up in the night to watch him. This is a clever write and playful. I enjoyed the fun. All good wishes

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Open to interpretation methinks but all three of them... so far, that is are fighting for pole position in me head....... v v vroooooom or summat like that :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

that doesn't alter the fact there are three possibilities, maybe more racing around my head....
kitty

5 Years Ago

If U care to explain - Private messaging - just in case it is below the belt!
Neville

5 Years Ago

...... Forget the bells, tis the words, the words:)
ahahahaha and fun and sexy it is indeed ..playful and a fine tribute ..i confess i am a bit confused as to who the she is tho :} no matter...i think its he that is the lucky one ;) i like the couplet format .. and the rhyming adds to the fun of it says i! pole position indeed :))))))))
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

ahahahaha! i hear you purring Ms. Kitty Girl ;)
kitty

5 Years Ago

Well tuned engine and sturdy chasis eh!
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

;) ......................
Viva mischievous muse! Viva competitive Kitty! She always can win her way!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

Note that Lewis Hamilton's win at Formula One was the inspiration. His ex Nicole was the other!
lightsong

5 Years Ago

Yes I noticed! Ha! ;)
kitty

5 Years Ago

Triggered by those facts!
I really enjoyed this. It can be taken a couple of different ways and leaves me wondering, who's engine was racing harder when they reached the finish line?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

The competitive lady I'd say ~ only because I am 'Woman' with a competitive streak but thinking of t.. read more
Loved this one Kitty old friend, sorry I haven't been very active for a while but things are improving according to the Doc' Change from Chemo to Radio therapy and see what happens. You always had pole position for all the time I've known you. take care Rod.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

Ho



Glad to see you on page Matey: means that Him upstairs isnt quite .. read more

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Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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