Where the Caged Bird Does Sing

Where the Caged Bird Does Sing

A Poem by eleniel

The land where milk and honey flows,

Is where I'd love to go,

the thing is just that nobody knows,

The land where milk and honey flows.

It's a never ending chase,

An idyllic place,

Of honey and milk and cheerios.


Just never, ever will it be,

never will it happen to me,

For it to matter,

For me to see,

I shall surely have to be free.


Completely, without boundaries,

Up up high mountains,

Up where the caged bird does sing,

Up where the clouds embrace the earth.

Where love does bring,

Less heartbreak,

More happiness.


Up up where I can forever be,

free and unconditionally me,

See the honey,

See the milk,

Land where there exists no filth.

Land where everyone is free,

Can unconditionally see.


Though nobody knows,

Imagination prevails,

No flags mark its borders,

Imagination; far away it sails.


Up up high mountains,

Up where the caged bird does sing,

Up where the clouds embrace the earth,

The land that nobody knows,

The land where milk and honey flows.


© 2010 eleniel



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This feels like a song, and I can paint a picture of a young lady, so carefree, running across the meadow of heaven. Very beautifully described and written. Thank you for sharing your imaginary thoughts :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this poem because it's got a beauty to it and it flows nicely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very good poem. I can totally see the 'Up where the clouds embrace the earth.' in my head. Also 'Up up where I can forever be, free and unconditionally me' makes this a very strong poem.
I love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2010
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Tags: poem, bird, honey, milk, sadness

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eleniel
eleniel

Germany



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Hi, I'm Eleniel! Some infos: +I live in Germany +I am 17 years old +I love writing +I am obsessed with scented lotions +I find candles pretty +Dogs are always better than cats +Coca cola is .. more..

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