Retorts

Retorts

A Poem by Monster ^.^
"

Who wins the argument?

"
I say this, you say that,
Disapproval is your note,
I say that, you say this,
Are we ever on the same boat?

I reply this, you freak out,
I claim that, you contradict,
I deliver that, you don't listen,
I voice this, there's a conflict.

We'll we ever get over,
the misunderstandings we have?
We'll we ever get to be
the pair we started as?

Oh, your retorts are my destruction!
No more, no more!
I surrender, you win!
Don't force it, no more!

© 2013 Monster ^.^


Author's Note

Monster ^.^
Yeah, thanks to an undesirable someone who inspired this poem.

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brilliantly written. it is one of the best poem you have written. Misunderstandings are there in every house but no one wants to publicize. well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on February 5, 2013
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Tags: misunderstanding, retort, retorts, reply, claim, discussion

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Monster ^.^
Monster ^.^

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My real name is JS Legara. I'm Male, 18 years of age, taking up Accountancy. I really love writing Short Stories, I like them funny. Since I could make through poetry and stage plays o-kay, I try t.. more..

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