Unendurable Weightlessness

An ease to float beyond compare
above those who strive hard
creates an emotion,
A weightlessness unmeasurable.

A feeling of such,
pleasurable to all or some,
yet diminishing as time flies,
and becomes unbearable...

Touching the stars,
is not as exhilarating,
if to touch them...
is of no effort...

Weightlessness goes unendurable
if the meaning of life perishes...

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

Touching the stars,
is not as exhilarating,
if to touch them...
is of no effort...



ohhhhhh mmyyyy GOOOODDDD!!!!!!!! i love these lines! the title caught my eyes and the poem was outstanding!!!! beautifuL!!!!!!!!!! i love the endind! and how it all flows together! beautiful

[Monster ^.^]

You make me blush! hahaha! Thank you very much! haha

[Coyote Poetry]

"A feeling of such,
pleasurable to all or some,
yet diminishing as time flies,
and becomes unbearable..."
Artwork and poetry was amazing. I like the flow of thoughts and the logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very late. You are welcome.