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It has a lot of power in such a short and quick write. I know it can be hard to go back and revise your work, because about 90% of the time, at least for me, it's already the best it's gonna get. Because if you add or change it's gonna lose the impact it had, not gonna be as powerful. But I think this could be a better piece with more description and maybe another 4-8 lines. However, it's great as it stands. Keep up the good work and never stop writing!!
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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