These Four Walls

These four walls
Keep me sane
Help my brain
To think straight

 

These four walls

Are my home

Just me, all alone

With no place to go

 

These four walls

Imprison me

For good reason

Those beyond

Can not hear my calls

 

These four walls

Keep others safe

Keep me away

To do no harm

 

But these four walls

Can not save me

From myself

 

Yet here I will stay

There is no escape

Reviews

[megaluv92]

I like this. A whole lot. :) Hope this helps get your badge. :)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Great theme!

[RJM]

isolation breeds beauty and death from the world of others. Beautiful work!

[J. R.]

The repetition really drives the point home. The feeling of isolation and helplessness. It's simple, yet very powerful.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nice job, i could feel the emotion in this. very good description. :)

[Michael X]

very nice job, has smooth rhythm and lively imagery.

[Kat24]

Hi,
This is very interesting. Good job. Kat24