Another Brick

Another Brick

A Poem by ellemorell

Two lives, bound together by their burdens, it seems, when warm memorys are distant & the heart is hardened by worthless sorry's crimes.

The stones in the wall are stacked high now but it still hurts to withold forgiveness sought, to crumble the mortar that holds it.

Promises are not realities. Love is not always kindness. Reality is subjective and herein lies the heart of our dilemma.

© 2017 ellemorell



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How philosophical, though I feel sympathic to what your scribing suggests

Posted 3 Months Ago


ellemorell

3 Months Ago

Thank you for reading & sympathising. This definitely punctuates a low point but I do feel there is .. read more
These are profound observations, an effective way of expressing the tension between love and reality.

Somehow the wall still stands, precarious and fragile.

(memories (plural) - not memory's)

Posted 4 Months Ago


ellemorell

4 Months Ago

Memories, yes thank you for that!

And also for reading and comprehending another of .. read more

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Added on July 19, 2017
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ellemorell
ellemorell

Melbourne, Australia



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This space was blank for a long time, in part because I found comfort in the anonymity, in part because I didn't know what to say. But time has passed, what was a spur of the moment outlet for a perp.. more..

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