The Gull and The Clam

The Gull and The Clam

A Poem by Alz Alz
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A very short poem.

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The night sea sails upon the silver moon
as the miserable gull cries for it’s lost clam.


The waves still as the sea sleeps
as the clam drifts to where he last swam.


© 2010 Alz Alz



Author's Note

Alz Alz
this poem's cute :)

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I really like the imagery used un this piece.
And there seems to be a bit of alliteration in the first lines of both stanzas. I'm a sucker for alliteration.
Amazing poem! Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Once again, amazing imagery, the image of the sea and the moon perfect. I can hear the gull squawking and complaining about it's lost clam and just see the clam lazily drifting to the ocean floor. Amazing. Truly amazing. You are truly talented.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Bud
How we long for what we lose... It leaves our hunger crying out... Wonderful piece. A joy to read. Often we take for granted what we hold in our hands. Never realizing the importance of such, until we drop it. Outstanding, with so few words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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this was extremely short but i could still picture everything in my head...i liked it...and by the way i think u might have meant drift?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Bee
I liked it. Sorry that this isn't one of the usual reviews I usually give, but I'm not much of a poem person. Cute though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this poem is whimsical and lighthearted, a fun and colored reading,
as i am sure alot of folks enjoy the nature of such environments
as salty air and low tides. keep up the good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on January 5, 2010
Last Updated on January 7, 2010
Tags: gull, clam, sea, ocean, water

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Alz Alz
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