Cigarette Midnight

Cigarette Midnight

A Poem by Alz Alz
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Freak.

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Cigarette midnight.
Disorder galaxies.
Morphine obedience.
Automatic deprivation.
Feeding pain.



© 2010 Alz Alz



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Alz Alz
Freak.

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Interesting enough... this could as easily be about cigarettes or illegal substances as much as it could be about love... considering that to some degree, whther it love, music, drugs, etc, we are all addicts in one way or another... nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems like, knowing your fears, then facing them. Nice. To the point and not spelled out for the reader opens this piece for a multitude of interpretation. Very good write.


Posted 7 Years Ago


we humans have our needs and our needs need fixes and we are more than happy to be loyal to them

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is an amazing ditty and thoughtful annotation for an addiction. Many writers survive with a combination of booze, nicotine and caffeine. Perhaps it's because we feel too much at times?

I heard a saying once that 'a poet is a man born without skin'. To me this poem is a reaction against the exposure we can't always handle.

This is a great write. Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Words rushed through needing a fix...the title caught my attention right off...Im a smoker...a helpless addict of nicotine and caffeine. I get it....I used to have some heavy addictions of my own, and as short as this is, it punches well.
All addicts are obedient to the fix.



Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem is so simple and short, but so strong. Making the font big helps, too. XD But seriously, this is an awesome poem. Kudos.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this piece.
Very good job here! =)
I like the bluntness of it.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 27, 2010
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