A Dozen Red Roses

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I lie awake and daydream

About that perfect day

When you'd give me a dozen red roses

And take my breath away

Their beauty would be beyond compare

And so perfect in their stance

And in the pristine vase  I'm place them

They'd twirl in a nimble, willowy dance

The water would swirl at the base

The aroma would rise through the air

Those thorns hidden behind their grace

I wouldn't give them a mindful care

Your smile at my utter delight

Would make me smile just oh so more

And we'd laugh together hand in hand

Another daydream to adore

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Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. I especially liked the details of the how the roses "Twirl in a nimble, Willowy dance". I really liked that. This is really nice. I feel like im seeing your dream.