Home

 ~

Please open the doors

Open yours arms

Open your heart

I'm home

 

Take me in

Into your arms

Into your heart

I'm home

 

Nurture me

By your ways

By your heart

I'm home

 

Love me always

With your soul

 With you heart

I'm home

 

Don't lead my forward

Walk by my side

With our  hands entwined

 I'm home

 

Let my live for you

Die for you

Love for you

I'm home 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I think that your short stanzas are good here. You use few words, but send a powerful message. In stanza five I think you could swing the "I'm home" part of line three down to make it a line four and even it with the other stanzas. Well done overall, another good write.