A Summer Dream Full of Surprises

A Summer Dream Full of Surprises

A Poem by India Damaris

I wrote this the summer of 1976, I was around 14. Fun to reminisce.


A summer dream full of surprises

A cool caress of sweet mountain air filtered through pine and aspen, swirled across crystal dappled lakes out of wandering canyons alive with dancing brooks.

Mountains close to the clouds filling our eyes with loveliness expand your heart with blue misty feelings, your soul with Gods glory sculptured lands, through ferns bent with treasures of dew post plush, spangled meadows of daisies and the dew diamonds of dawn………….



© 2010 India Damaris

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I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, this is a wonderful write and its amazing that you kept your writing for so long! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

What a stunning piece... forged when you were 14! Damn this is good - the descriptions and mood, spellbinding!

Much enjoyed the atmosphere, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on January 17, 2010
Last Updated on February 3, 2010
Tags: summer, schools out, teen poetry


India Damaris
India Damaris

Orlando, FL

About the author: I am 46, from Montana US. I've been living in Florida for the last 16 years. I'm an artist, writer and enjoy every minute of what I do. I grew up being outside mostly with no cell p.. more..


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