Trapped

Trapped

A Poem by Emily W

This game must begin,
We're slowly falling in.
We need to find a way back,
Away from this strange place.

The doors are sealed shut,
Windows boarded up.
Times running out,
But no exits can be found.

No cheats were created.
No help available.
It has to be figured out somehow.

Time to think how to escape.

If only there were instructions,
If only it was real,
Then it may be easier to work out.

© 2013 Emily W


Author's Note

Emily W
Let me know what you think :)

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I think that we all have that place that we think that we cannot escape. That place that we think is unbreakable, but we have to have trust in the fact that no situation is actually unescapable and realize the power that our attitude and that our minds have. It was a very good poem and you are talented. Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :), and that is good advice, we are all stronger then we think :)



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A good view about being trapped... at times the doors and walls are just that barriers... if you can create... then in turn you can make a key to open the locks of the doors which hold you back... if they are walls then you must break them... and tear them down... Life is not given an instruction book... you decide how that will be... no one else can... everyone has a brilliant mind... you have to open it and release the potential...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily W

10 Years Ago

Another great review thank you, I like that about making a key to open the locks, if there's any bar.. read more
Witty !

Nice rhyme & flow which I like in poems ! Good stuff Emily !



Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thanks again, I appreciate your nice reviews Tom :)
I really like the urgency of this poem. You get a real 'feel' of being trapped, very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :)
i think that you might want to alter WAS instructions to WERE instructions...I sort of liked this because of its ambiguity....and secrecy....We all get trapped in one way or another in a whole variety of ways

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily W

10 Years Ago

Ah yes thanks for pointing that out :). Thank you for your review :)
I think that we all have that place that we think that we cannot escape. That place that we think is unbreakable, but we have to have trust in the fact that no situation is actually unescapable and realize the power that our attitude and that our minds have. It was a very good poem and you are talented. Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :), and that is good advice, we are all stronger then we think :)
I really enjoy this poem keep it up. Very insightful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nathaniel Williams

10 Years Ago

Yeah your doing a great job, I wanted more once I finished reading your poem. :)
Emily W

10 Years Ago

ah thanks, that is good to hear :D
Nathaniel Williams

10 Years Ago

Bless what inspires you to write.

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Added on August 8, 2013
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