I Love Him

I Love Him

A Poem by Mirror
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Tale of fear, doubt, confidence, and love.

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I Love Him

 

I love him

I dare not tell

My second world is dark

And the king of it is dare

Dare rot dare spill

My first world peak

And the queen of it is tale

I will

I love him.


© 2017 Mirror



Author's Note

Mirror
My first love poem.

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The confidence to seek a fairy tale ending. Love conquers all. This reveals a small piece of your heart and your will, never doubt that talent and that ability to connect to not only the person you love but to the world , for I have a feeling you can bridge connections and reach out to many!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Keegan. Okay, I will. I will.



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nice poem of love. good to be in love. thanks for sharing,

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Mirror

1 Week Ago

Thank you Roxane. :)
wonderful clever use of the metaphor and bit of word play to boot ..a dark tale it can be to love...we do have two sides ..one and all..don't we ..very fine write ..the enigma is superb!
love it!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You E. Thank you from my heart.
Honest, powerful and wonderful words and emotions shared. I liked the complete poem. Thank you Mirror for sharing the outstanding words and poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much, Coyote....Thanks.
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

You are welcome my friend.
WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
and a great love poem it is,but you have to tell him for it to come true

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Word. I did after writing this poem. He now knows.
In its simplicity I think this evocative poem portrays the feelings of fear, doubt, confidence and love, very well.
I like the conclusion 'the queen of it is tale'. I hope it is a successful story for her!
Nicely done, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Great Aunt. 'the queen of it is tale' is my confidence line. It is indeed successful sto.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

2 Weeks Ago

Oh, that is wonderful! I am pleased to hear it.
Quite a journey Mirror. With turns and a happy ending

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Tony. You are right about the turns and happy ending. Thank you.
This is a simple beautiful poem of love unspoken. I'm not sure that I understand the middle section about my first and second worlds and the dare rot dare spill line but i'm not good at interpreting abstract writing.
I like the symmetrical structure of your poem which gives it a very satisfying feel.
Well done,
Alan

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Alan. The worlds shows two minds. Dare can go bad and pour out.... rot, spill.
alanwgraham

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, that helps me make sense of it!
Alan
It is interesting and I enjoy the images that came from it. Thank you for the writing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Seeker. Thanks....
Simply beautiful , words define desire in your soul. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Stranger. Thanks a mil...
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3 Weeks Ago

You welcome .
The confidence to seek a fairy tale ending. Love conquers all. This reveals a small piece of your heart and your will, never doubt that talent and that ability to connect to not only the person you love but to the world , for I have a feeling you can bridge connections and reach out to many!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Keegan. Okay, I will. I will.

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Mirror
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Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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