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My Shadow

My Shadow

A Poem by Mirror
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It is all about writers who steal and make fame with other people's work.

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If you read,

You write

Say a word

And you are heard

But let it be your hand

Let it be your voice

For if it yet be my creation

My shadow only you are

And if death may do us part

The sun shall reveal your heart

The world will know you then

That all this while you are

Nothin’ but my shadow


© 2017 Mirror



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Theft always comes to light as do lies, as you so beautifully state here, "And if death may do us part
The sun shall reveal your heart" Yet there are those who don't mind dwelling in the darkness. You hit home hard with this piece. Just what we were talking about yesterday. Another exceptional write, Mirror!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

1 Month Ago

Thank you Div, again. Those who love dwelling in darkness are below us. They can steal all they want.. read more



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Theft always comes to light as do lies, as you so beautifully state here, "And if death may do us part
The sun shall reveal your heart" Yet there are those who don't mind dwelling in the darkness. You hit home hard with this piece. Just what we were talking about yesterday. Another exceptional write, Mirror!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

1 Month Ago

Thank you Div, again. Those who love dwelling in darkness are below us. They can steal all they want.. read more
Wow, powerful words with so much truth.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Outsider. Your review means a lot. You are also a good writer.
ohhhhhhhhh edgy piece Mirror ..sharp and well said says i ... can i copy? :))))))
this is a keeper ... metaphor rich and strong throughout .. flow is musical ..only read once and ...no stumbles...i think this is inspired for sure ..
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Months Ago

Yes dear!!!! Thank you plennnnnntyyyy! *hugs* Copy? Don't forget you will be just my shadow, lol!!! .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yes...it is disheartening ... i am too old to care a whole lot myself .. and have no intentions of p.. read more
Mirror

2 Months Ago

Yes my friend :)) thank u for the quote too. its a comfort..
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I read the poem before I read the description.

It evokes emotion and I reread a few times to try and understand (this is more about me, it takes me a while to think things through). It felt like loss of some sort, a child, a lover, maybe the loss of ownership when you put your writing into the world and then someone else reads into it their interpretation.

After reading the description the poem changes, it is still very emotive and flows better. The line about 'death may do us part' has a good rhythm, it feels like I need to think on that some more to understand how death will expose the deceit.

Now for the most unhelpful bit of the review - I really liked it, thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Months Ago

So far on this Cafe, you are the most honest in terms of your inner self. am sorry to change what yo.. read more
De

2 Months Ago

No you didn't kill my love for it, just really interesting to understand. Ah thank you, I'm going t.. read more

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Mirror
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Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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