TONIGHT

TONIGHT

A Poem by Mirror

I came home
once again
I found myself all alone
Once again
I went to the kitchen
Pots, Knives, and Kettles
All in a mess


Even then my hunger abandoned me
Sinking my desires with me
I forced myself a bath
Unwillingly pull on my nightie
And moved to shut the door
Once on my bed without duvet
The cold i will endure tonight


The room dark and bled
With silence only Samson can break
Oh! with a soft sigh I realized
That that is not the only thing Samson can break
Yes, tonight
Yes, My heart
Yes, Samson, my sleep.

© 2017 Mirror


Author's Note

Mirror
The shrill memories of a broken heart.

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The poem can have some optimism in it . Like she could have known Samson isnt worth the pain in her or that she should leave the past behind and live a new one .
The story has a tint of frustation in it that i loved . I dont knkw about others but i felt that anger dwelling inside that girl .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Raghib dear, how true. From the girl's eye, she is frustrated and i couldn't cover it up in my writi.. read more
Mirror

6 Years Ago

And thank you for the beautiful review.



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so beautiful and straight from the heart :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pragati. Thanks so much. you review means a lot
So simple, so bleak, I feel this all too well. Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you Rose. I appreciate your review so much.
Rebecca_Rose

6 Years Ago

Don't you dare even mention it. Any time. I personally believe that constructive criticism is the mo.. read more
Mirror

6 Years Ago

yes dearest friend. True, every word. All writers should brace up to get it if they want to grow.
Such a vivid scene to imagine. Domestic chaos and in the midst of it emotional chaos in darkness and silence. How we long for that presence! So finely written and expressed, my friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you, DIVYA. You are the best too! :)
A very sad journey in these words. You made the reader feel every step. I liked the use of the description. I liked the ending my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Coyote. Your review always means a lot to me.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Mirror
Mirror

Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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