You Are My Song

You Are My Song

A Poem by Mirror
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Wonder love

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You are the words in my song
You are the melody
You are the harmony
You are the reason I'll sing
The song that you gave to me
Now I return to you
You are the song that I sing

The song touches my heart
You are the one touching me
When I dance to the tunes
You play my love like a flute
Oh How wonderful is this love
When you are so close to my heart
And I just can't get you out of my head

You are my song
You are


© 2017 Mirror



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This is so beautiful & lyrical, I can feel it as a song. The sentiments are simply-stated, but that makes it sound so earnest, along with a slight bit of repetition of ideas, using different ways to show each time, & this adds to the way your song has an almost pleading tone, like persuasion or seduction (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


Mirror

1 Day Ago

Right, you are Marg!!! Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
lovely sentiments and mood in your poem Mirror ...a wonderful love .. V2 L1 small typo perhaps ..touches .. instead of "touch"
"You Are My Song" speaks to my youth and an idealism that life forges some real into it ;)
a real feel good read for me
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Mirror

1 Week Ago

Oh, thank you for the correction. I will quickly work on it. And yes, that youth feeling right.." :-.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

:) ................
Beautiful and hopeful words shared. I liked the energy and the hope in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

1 Week Ago

Thank you Coyote, you've been a great reviewer and encourage me so much. thank you.
Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

I liked this one and you are welcome.
A poem with great words and could become a song with great lyrics.
Nice piece Mirror!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

1 Week Ago

Thank you Hanee... I appreciate your view. Thank you.
How about now you put a tune to the words and make a real song, this is beautiful

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Cas, thank you! I thought of that, but how do I start? Thanks for the encouragement...:-)
Do love a romantic tune. Slowly playing with gentle and smooth touches. Sometimes I want it to be hard rock, heavy metal with the heavy loud slamming.

Always and with love,

Jayden D.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Yes, Jay. I had tunes in my head while writing this piece. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate.
Matthew Kult

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome

Matthew
Wonderfully romantic and intensely sensual. You have a rhythm that make words have impact.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you John for stopping by.....! :-)

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Added on November 16, 2017
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Mirror
Mirror

Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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