#Critical Critics#

#Critical Critics#

A Poem by Mirror
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Imperfections exist everywhere.

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They are brash
Careless, carefree, witty
Adventurous, feisty
Shhhh! blunt and Sagittarius
Like the Americans, she whispers


They are corny, sharp, clever
Gulls, ambitious, greedy
Goal-oriented, fiery, and Leo
Shhhh! Like the Nigerians  I think, he chuckles


They are sweet, charm
Loyal, honorable,
Sharp as swords, swift as chariots
Uhmm, colorful and Libra
Like the Asians, do you think?, They shudders

And this "they'?
As bad as Critics, the critics said


© 2017 Mirror



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Truth as comical as it can be without offence. Worded cleverly.. illustrated colourfully... a lesson in how to.. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Emma. I appreciate your kind review.
Everyone's a critic.
I critically like this.
Should be published everyday.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Paul, for stopping by... Always love your reviews.
Charmingly witty

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Matthew, good to hear from you....
Matthew Kult

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome

Matthew
lol,especially an aries, loved the way you put this together,,happy holdays

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

lol. Aries are carefree, simple, and sometimes as blunt as Sagittarius. They are compatible - I mean.. read more
You have beautifully crafted this poem. I just want to remind you that Aquarians are universal, they criticize no one and love every one !




Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mrudula Rani

3 Weeks Ago

You know a lot about zodiac signs! Is it a hobby?
Mirror

3 Weeks Ago

Rani, It is curiosity that had me studying them. Gat 'em in finger tips too. it makes tolerates easi.. read more
Mrudula Rani

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you- all the best!

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Mirror
Mirror

Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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