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A Poem by Emilee Grimm

the blue fills the void (your eyes)

warmth fills the sorrow (your voice)

laughter substitutes the pain (your jokes)

smiles forced over scars (your face)

I never realized how difficult

coherent articulation could be

I wish I could be more

than just some girl you talk to

maybe someday we’ll be

more than just conversation

maybe one day you’ll notice something

more than conversation

and maybe sometime I’ll realize

this will never be more than conversation

© 2010 Emilee Grimm


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Ohh that is nice..
Your eyes fill all the emptiness killing me inside
the warmth i feel take all sorrow away like never been
your laughter turns the world into something so different ,like never known before
your smile always brought life back to me
never thought a relation be so difficult
wish i could be more than a girl you turn to just to talk
wish one day we will be more than that
you see me deeper than just someone just to please you
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ohh that is nice..
Your eyes fill all the emptiness killing me inside
the warmth i feel take all sorrow away like never been
your laughter turns the world into something so different ,like never known before
your smile always brought life back to me
never thought a relation be so difficult
wish i could be more than a girl you turn to just to talk
wish one day we will be more than that
you see me deeper than just someone just to please you
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Emilee Grimm
Emilee Grimm

Somewhere, OH



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I share my poetry with others because it is the easiest way to express my feelings non-destructively. I greatly appreciate honest feedback, comments, and reviews. Lets101 Quizzes - Myspace Quiz.. more..

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