questions for the next one.

questions for the next one.

A Poem by Emilee Grimm
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simply out: questions for the next boyfriend...

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What if I let my hair grow limp and dull

What if I smiled without my heart

What if my eyes lost their shimmer

What if I decided I no longer cared

 

What if I told you I take back every word

What if I told you I’ve lied all along

What if I told you “You never made me smile”

What if I told you we were through

 

Would you still love me like you do today

Would you still want me like yesterday

Would you still care if I lived or died

Would you still be there when I cried?

© 2011 Emilee Grimm


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In a perfect world the answer to these questions would be “yes”
But in all truth, the answer is “NO”
But hay, what do I know?
Well done, good poem.


Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this...I feel like there is pain from a lost love and the questions maybe are still for that person? Regardless, it's beautiful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


test of true love eh?
i guess, these questions though hurt deeply, are the test of true love that we all need to go thru...coz if love has reasons, answers to these will make the love fly outta the window!!!
very well written!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Honest, raw feelings.Very intense pacing. I like the mood it creates. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Emilee Grimm
Emilee Grimm

Somewhere, OH



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