You're the one.

You're the one.

A Poem by Emily?

You're the one I talk to when I'm lonely.
You're the one I go to for help.
You're the one I want to see when I'm down.
You're the one I want to call when I need to hear your voice.
You're the one I want to comfort me when I'm scared.
You're the one that's with me when I'm lonely.
You're the one that helps me through everything.
You're the one that make me happy.
You're the one that has the voice of an angel.
You're the one that comforts me when I'm scared.
All of these things are absolutely true, because I know you're the one.

© 2010 Emily?


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Awwwwwww, you're the one!
This poems says it should be - Emily! - instead of - Emily?
Why? Cause You're The One!

Posted 14 Years Ago


And you're the one that knows how to write a great piece of poetry. This was a really enjoyable read. Excellent work.
Although, I think it was a little too repetitive (only kidding). It was excellent. The repetition was good, and the poem was carefully weighted. It seemed to be about the right length so that the reader would not lose interest with the constant repetition. It engaged the reader immediately, and it was very effective. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww this one was quite sweet and cute :) keep it up babe

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Emily?
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My name is Emily. I haven't been writing lately. I guess you could say I've been on a break. I feel I've matured a lot in the last few months. I'm more serious about my writing, and plan to continue.. more..

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