Winter

Winter

A Poem by emipoemi

 

Winter! Winter!

Sending shivers through my skin!

Winter! Winter!

With the wind I cannot win!

 

Winter! Winter!

Very blurry, bleak, and bare!

Winter! Winter!

 Ev’ry breath wafts through the air!

 

(O) Winter! Winter!

Writhing in unease untold!

Winter! Winter!

Wrapped in blankets sevenfold!

(hhh-ha! hhh-ha!)

God d****t it’s so cold-

God is merciful!

Keep in mind

God is merciful!

He is kind!

He will stop the wind of Winter

Sending shivers through my skin,

But it’s such a piercing splinter,

With the wind I cannot win!

 

hhh-ha! hhh-ha!

hhh-ha-a-hh-ha-a-ha!

hhh-ha! hhh-ha!

hhh-ha-a-hh-ha-a-ha!

 

Winter! Winter!

Chatter, splutter, whine, and wail!

Winter! Winter!

Achy, worn, and deathly pale!

 

(hhh-ha!)

 

Winter! Winter!

So inane to be outside!

Winter! Winter!

Nowhere anyone can hide!

 

(O) Winter! Winter!

 Writhing in unease untold!

Winter! Winter!

Wrapped in blankets sevenfold!

(hhh-ha! hhh-ha!)

God d****t it’s so cold-

God is merciful!

Keep in mind

God is merciful!

He is kind,

He will stop the wind of Winter

Sending shivers through my skin!

But it’s such a piercing splinter,

With the wind I cannot win!

 

hhh-ha! hhh-ha!

hhh-ha-a-hh-ha-a-ha!

hhh-ha! hhh-ha!

hhh-ha-a-hh-ha-a-ha!

 

Winter!

With the wind I cannot win!

-EDP




© 2018 emipoemi



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I love the format of this poem! Also, you have mastered punctuations in this poem. Especially, the parentheticals and exclamation points. It all comes together in a really rhythmic and pretty poem! Good job!

Posted 7 Months Ago


emipoemi

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much! If you're interested:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBANAbgqDbg&t=6s
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emipoemi

7 Months Ago

.....apparently, it doesn't work when you share links....but that link is to the virgin performance .. read more
ellen

7 Months Ago

Cool! I'll check it out!
LOL. This was rewarding to read and laugh at. hhh-ha! hhh-ha! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


 Relic

8 Months Ago

haha, nice! I could never do that in front of an audience. Great job. :)
emipoemi

8 Months Ago

Thank you! It has become a crowd pleaser over the years. I bring it out every Winter for the enterta.. read more
 Relic

8 Months Ago

I can see you enjoy doing it too. haha
This is such a unique masterpiece! I has a musicality and rhythm and refrain that is just infectious. It's written with laughter, intelligence and love.

This is a very good poem!!

WELL DONE!!!



Posted 8 Months Ago


emipoemi

8 Months Ago

Thank you! Yeah, this is actually a crowd pleaser, and I bring it out every Winter (it's around 4 ye.. read more
BlakPrince

8 Months Ago

I see you're saying this is a crowd pleaser. So Do you actually recite your poems in public venues?<.. read more
emipoemi

8 Months Ago

I do indeed. On occasion here in Toronto. You can fin the virgin recital of this exact poem here: ht.. read more
Haaaaaaaa! Great! “God d****t it’s so cold- God is merciful...”yes- BUT- give a poor cold guy a break please! Beautifully written in form, flow, cadence rhyme. Perfect musicality through clenched teeth! Great parody-absolutely love it! :):):)

Posted 8 Months Ago


emipoemi

8 Months Ago

So glad you did! Thanks for reading! It was definitely fun to write.

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Added on January 20, 2018
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