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Luna, ¡No Te Vayas!

Luna, ¡No Te Vayas!

A Poem by emipoemi

Luna ¡no te vayas!

¡No me dejes en oscuridad!

Que yo a duras penas

Por mis penosas venas

Mantengo las rellenas

De la felicidad.

 

Luna ¡no te vayas!

¡Deshazme de mi torva soledad!

La vida, como pasa

Despacio, me arrasa,

Borrándome la raza,

La casa y sociedad.

 

Luna ¡no te vayas!

¡Quédate adentro de mi bol!

No hay qué me más deslumbra,

Que nada más relumbra

Bajo la penumbra

Del etéreo farol.

 

Luna ¡no te vayas!

Yo sé que tengo hambre muy voraz-

Pero el sutil bailongo

En este cuadrilongo

Cesó y del mondongo

Ni rayo de solaz.

-EDP


© 2018 emipoemi



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Let's stick to French darlin' cause the only word I got the meaning of is Luna haha (so embarrassing)

However, I can comment on the flow, that it is breathtaking specially that Spanish is one of the "musical" languages, so it makes it even more so enchanting..

Your talent amazes me

Posted 5 Months Ago


emipoemi

5 Months Ago

Aww, I'm sorry you couldn't understand all of it. I had been meaning to translate this one, just hav.. read more
Enrique Iglesias watch out! This young poet has matched and exceeded your plaintive song with his cleverness, humour, technical, bilingual and gastronomical perfection! Moon, don’t go! Better yet- Mondongo, don’t stay!:):) You Rock my friend!

Posted 6 Months Ago


emipoemi

6 Months Ago

I was worried that no one was going to to get the joke that engendered this poem. It makes it all th.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Months Ago

".........:)!

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Added on January 20, 2018
Last Updated on January 20, 2018
Tags: poetry, poem, solemn, absurd, solitude, mondongo

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emipoemi
emipoemi

Toronto, Canada



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