Young Hearts

A poem intended for young lovers

Gay in dealing the proof of life

With family, friends, and oneself inside,

Truly a cheerful youth song that rhymes

Single to the fullest happy and free.

 

Suddenly the eyes see exceptional beauty

Captures the mind regardless of the heart,

Receptors travel the message to the mind

“That beauty I wish could be mine only.”

 

To rest is so hard and waking up is simple

Eager to see the exceptional beauty,

Unknown feeling not sure of what it is

As long as they could be on their own fantasy.

 

Seeing a glance of the heart pumping blink

Could immediately put a smile on their face,

Taking all the moments and spell of romanticism

And dream even if the sun is so bright.

 

When they have finally attached their hearts

The influx of each day is easy follow,

Happy hearts, jolly minds, enjoying the love

As if the world is turning according to their hands.

 

Day by day young hearts change

Thinking of what is true priority,

Decisions are made according to pressure

Leaving each other with broken hearts.

 

Room becomes shelter

 Bed becomes friend,

The world is so bright

But still so afraid.

 

Young hearts do remember how far they have gone

Yet no cancellations of living all behind,

Each heart must have felt if love was forever

Because the mind says it should stop for the better.

 

Once they accept the challenge of the world

Ending the feeling is still to summon,

Because seeing each other after the tears

Can bring back the sweetness of so many years.

 

But then they are strong to fight all the pain

Young hearts are soldiers that never surrender,

Love is sacrifice and sacrifice is to live

Dividing the joined hearts into one, again.

 

Young hearts must prove that they are not fooled

By love or fantasy, trust or beliefs,

Standing on their own will make them see

That true love can wait just enjoy being free.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very good, i really enjoyed, very deep ! Risking to be repetitive, your rhymes are amazing, anyway in this particular poem what really caught my attention was stanza 7 that was full of meaning, i'm glad you let the words speak for them not explaining too much and stanza 10's verses 3 and 4 where you clearly played with oxymorons (sacrifice-live, dividing-into one).
Great job :)

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

same as your other poems.....amazingly true and honest. this one seems real, and pure! keep up the wonderful work!

[emman]

thanks so much :)

[Emilie Barn]

I like it because of the true feelings. Nice job =))

[Krista Weiss]

I love this poem! It's like my life haha

[emman]

Thank you Aditi :)

[Aditi Mahajan]

True feelings!

[AK]

Wow! A deep poem! It amazes me how you turn such a cliché topic into something so very unique. Keep writing!