Truth and Absolute

A poem of Love

He asked not just twice but many times

She refused to the will and amazing exertion,

He kneeled just to prove the will to convert

She smiled on the face of the dying virile

 

He bought the chocolates of the richest people

She ignored all the sweetness and then walked away,

He cried to the fullest and melted all the way

She smiled to her mind and thought to decide.

 

He asked all the things of his incompetence

She emphasized that love is not a material thing,

He thought of the best reapportion

She let him did other ways to convince

 

He sang and danced out of his knowledge

She smiled and laughed proof of being happy,

He delivered a speech from his mind and heart

She cried as the proof of being inspired.

 

He asked for the answer of the question that’s left

She grinned and said “well it’s YES.”

He jumped out of luck, fulfilled and overjoyed

She brightened her eyes to the man of her life.

 

Love is absolute should be given all truths

That when you fall don’t “fall” and die to the end

Do the sacrifices that would keep you together

Because he is for she and she is for he.

 

 

Reviews

[daisyreelorraine]

He was a boy and she was a girl..haha..was just tempted to borrow this line from one of Avril Lavigne's most rock n' roll song..ahaha..btaw2x..nice is an understatement for this poem..brilliant piece again emman..hurot na jud tanan nko bilib sa imuha ai..hehe..i'm out of words kei murag relate na relate gid ko ani nga piece..haha..based on experience?

[emman]

Thank you Daisy!hmmm..not actually based on MY experience..basin imoha??hahaha :p keep on reading and commenting..I'll wait sa imong new poems :D

[daisyreelorraine]

..haha..ingon btaw ko nga relate much kau..LOL! XD

[emman]

hahaha!oyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :p

[外人 (Gaiji..]

I loved the HEs and SHEs, they built a scene, i could figure these couple up in my mind and all the things you've written became a nice story :) Great job, a small story in verses ... and you even gave it a "moral message" like in tales :)

[Riley]

So true. Its the little things that matter not what you can buy a person that shows love.

[emman]

thanks :)

[Emilie Barn]

Amazing! Nice job =))

[Krista Weiss]

Cute poem!

[emman]

thanks :)

[emman]

Thank you!!!! :)

[Aditi Mahajan]

I think this poem should be made into a song for a romantic movie. Hats off to your writing skills!