why

why

A Poem by Abbie

why do we cry

when were all alone

why do people die

every day

why does the sun rise

every morning

why does every day

seem like a life time

why are there gangs

and wars

why why why why??????

do we sleep and cry

© 2010 Abbie


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great poetic expression of brevity

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


well why not?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Life is just a pile of cliffhangers and unanswered questions, is it not?

Posted 12 Years Ago


We're born asking ourselves these questions, but for me, sometimes they're often never answered. I liked it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think we are born asking why and we pass on into the next life asking the same questions. If we found out the answers would we truly be happy? I don't know. Very good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very goood

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well done(: x

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:-)


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Abbie
Abbie

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my name is Abbie, i love 2 write poetry,but i am mostly nice anything you want to know ask more..

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