why

why

A Poem by Abbie

why do we cry

when were all alone

why do people die

every day

why does the sun rise

every morning

why does every day

seem like a life time

why are there gangs

and wars

why why why why??????

do we sleep and cry

© 2010 Abbie


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Hard questions. I love how you put the hardest questions in life all in place. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i luv this poem all ur ? u have are all the ones ive been thinking of all the time keep writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


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SAZ
I enjoyed how thoughtful and honest this piece was!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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RIO
Very thought provoking and questions that have been asked over and over by gazillions of people...great job.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


THIS IS REALLY GOOD ABBIE

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice poem and i have your anwser. life sucks plain and simple.

Posted 13 Years Ago


everything happens good and bad but that effecting you.we cant stop anything else but we can protect ourself with a patientance

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice intention of the poem....you've done a nice work on this but still it needs a little bit more emotions and creativity to this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good questions, one's that people have been trying to figure out for countless years and one's that have had many diverse perceptions created to shed light onto. My thought? Dying isn't a bad thing, imagine what the world would be like if we were all perpetual.... not good. We sure wouldn't appreciate and value our lives and time spent living them thats for sure. Gangs and wars are created by devisions we have created between ourselves- foolishly might I add- and because we all feel the need to fit in, to feel like we belong somewhere. For many, thats a gang.

Life does have many pains and sorrows but those are what teach us to grow, learn and love the good things that much more. Great poem, you bring up many controversial questions
take care

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sin that's answars to these questions

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Abbie

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