why

why

A Poem by Abbie

why do we cry

when were all alone

why do people die

every day

why does the sun rise

every morning

why does every day

seem like a life time

why are there gangs

and wars

why why why why??????

do we sleep and cry

© 2010 Abbie


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These are good questions but they are also the ones that cannot ever be answered. Great write!!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


This writing reflects sadness that everyone at some time or another has felt...keep writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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interesting questions..which I am sure we have all asked once in our lifetime..nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love all of these questions and the sadness behind there potential answers. Very thought provoking poem. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes Things Need To Be. In Motion And The Ocean Of Emotions Can Be Different Than Most Peoples. Each Day We Strive To Survive Another Day. Taking It And Running Away Is Most Common But Mostly We Sit Back And See It In Another View. These Gangs And Wars Are Never Ending. Always There And Most Of All.....
Why Do We Keep Believing Hope Can Be A Cure For The Impossible?

I Like This One. Very Good From A Sadden State.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Indeed, why. A sad set of reflections. Welcome to the Café and good luck with you writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hello Abbie,

A sad poem.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Abbie

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my name is Abbie, i love 2 write poetry,but i am mostly nice anything you want to know ask more..

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