April

Abundunt mushrooms to seek

 

Pretty spring flowers

 

Rain makes green grass

 

Ice cream days are near

 

Lying will animals soon awaken.

 

Author's Note

wrote this in fourth grade tell me what you think

Reviews

[Steve]

This is impressive for a young person....cool!

[No_One_Special]

Very cute and refreshing. Reminiscent of a nature haiku. I'm assuming the last line is in reference to hibernating animals awaking- would that actually be around April though? Hmm, I don't really know myself :P

[Tim]

Seen through the eyes of a child, beauty is enchanced and appreciated in ways adults can't see because it's all new. I guess the last line would be better with the word sleeping instead of lying.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Not bad for a fourth grader... The last line confused me, but I am not sure the word Lying is what you meant back then... This is an excellent poem thoug and a wonderful write. Very discriptive