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Mayhem

Mayhem

A Poem by black.butterfly

Mayhem


These wispy veins are so frail

as blood raptures through them.
It is what ties us in this jail;
our life---this overlapped mayhem.

I live meekly in my own skin
of flesh and flawed nature.
It is your eyes that make it so thin,
making me this wretched creature.

I wish to see you ache
even if reason  tells me otherwise.
I want you to see your mistake,
or else my rage and wrath will rise.

I would rather be worthy of your hate
than to deny me, even if I'm too late.

          

© 2012 black.butterfly



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black.butterfly
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I loved it :>)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Expresses that raw pain...

Posted 4 Years Ago


i am drawn to how beautiful your poems are, it is excellent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Well written

Posted 4 Years Ago


Painfully beautiful....:-) The sad true nature of relationships - the need for requited affection. Great piece...

Posted 5 Years Ago


The poem looks simple but we have to read it carefully to discern its message

Posted 5 Years Ago


very good writing;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I read this once enjoying the beauty in the words and then read it once again to relive the emotions it instilled within me. I enjoyed this poem very much.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is hard and cold poetry. I like it. I like the directness and anger in the words. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Hey, You can call me ean, I'm 24 years old girl. A little mind taking in the world and putting it down into words; every thought, every wonder---are all just fascinating in their own way. My fa.. more..

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