Lights

Lights

A Poem by black.butterfly

Lights

Walking on darker colors,
I see you from afar, lights.
Where we were & where we are,
we are somehow still connected.

Drifting away from you,
I call out your name, lights.
I pen it down recollecting it all,
your eyes & your words.

What are you, lights?
Shining bright through that crystal.
Are you a lover, a friend or a stranger?
For all I know, you are inside me.

Breaking into a thousand pieces, lights,
you greet my soul by breathing.
You release me, you save me!
by showing me the brighter colors.





© 2013 black.butterfly



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your last stanza is beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


As I read this, I pictured someone gazing through a crystal ball, trying to call their lover. Wondering where they are. Distance can make or break a relationship. I just hope those who do long distance are willing to be strong enough to handle it. Many can't as well as me, I've tried them a few times. Love takes two, not one person.

Posted 2 Years Ago


well, it's a nice and lovely write as i see here, i liked your ink and colorin' in words're awesome with your font...it's really a nice ink, depth, feel, intention, awesomenss'ss and so on..all are here..it's nice write to read. your last stanza is beautiful and has contained a lot of appropriate words.
nice flow of ink

Posted 4 Years Ago


Simply beautiful. It reminded me of music. Something we feel yet can't touch. Very well penned. ^_^

Posted 4 Years Ago


These lines are hauntingly well crafted, looking forward to more!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Purely marvelous.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Sam
Nice poem, really liked it. :)


100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


very good poem and also very creactive writing... I very much enjoyed reading this poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nice depiction of contrasting emotions.

Posted 4 Years Ago


outstanding.......very great thinking.....

Posted 4 Years Ago



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